About Crystal Davis

I created the book: Crystal Davis-The Amazing Girl
Because I thought people would like to see a adventure book about a 11 year old girl. I hope you like it! Commet about if you like or not. I wish this book could be published some day.
Thank you!

Charactars

Theses are the Charactars so far:
Mom (Alexandera Davis, Mrs. Davis, Queen of Fashion)
Dad (Leo Davis, Mr. Davis, King of Fashion)
Rose Davis (oldest daughter of Mrs and Mr. Davis)
Crystal (youngest daughter of Mrs and Mr Davis)
Butler (Crystal's butler, no name yet)
Ruby(Crystal's dog)
Another new servant for Crystal, Mr, Wood
The servant's two daughters(the one living with Crystal. Her name is June) the other one (living with Rose is Amy, there both eleven, but they are not twins)
Dawn(poodle, Amy's dog, the dog is a girl)
That is all the Charctars so far!...
If you have just started reading this I would tell you to start to the begining to the last post I made...

About the Charactars

Crystal Davis: Long blond hair, blue eyes, and likes to play the violin. She also very great in her privite school at her mansion. She hangs out with her yorkie, Ruby. Ruby is her only friend. She is nice but sometimes she can loose her timper. Crystal is 11.
Rose Davis: Short red hair, brown eyes, and does not play anything. She is ok in school. She is very mean to her sister and everyone else but mostly mean to her sister, Crystal. Rose is 14.
Alexandera Davis: She is the mom of Crystal and Rose. She is married to Leo Davis. She hates to be called Alex. She is not strict but she is very smart. She is 35. She has dirty blond hair and hazel eye color.
Leo Davis: Leo is married to Alexandera Davis. Leo is the dad of Crystal and Rose. He is a little strict and he is kind to everyone. He is also 35. He has redish brownish hair color and brown dark blue eyes.

Crystal Davis: Her fans

I have seen that some of you wish that my book was more exciting. I will try to make it very exciting! Maybe you can give me some ideas? And really people! I am only on page 9! It will get more exciting! But I wish you could be less mean. One person said that I hate this book! On one of the polls. I know my book is not as good as Chloe Kates! I just wish you people would be creative and think of this book. Like the best thing of your life! Like for of you people said, "The is just ok! If you hate it so bad just quiet reading! I don't care! I would like to see you do a better job!

Thursday, October 15, 2009

The Bad News Twisted

"Why can't they understand!", Crystal sobbed. She sat there crying for an hour. She didn't dare to go out of her room. If she did, her parents would yell at her! She also new that she can't be like this anymore. If she did it again and again, she might have to go to a bad school! Well, that is what Crystal calls it. She knew that her sister went through that when she was her age. The "bad school" is a place were she would have to learn to be a good child. I guess that school that Rose went to did not help her.
Crystal finally stopped crying and said, "I wonder if the whole world will hate me now? I do not want that to happen! Ruby, do you think I should go out into the living room to say I am sorry?" Ruby barked.

Crystal opened the door and peeked out and see if anything was there. Crystal saw that her Mother and Father was there. Crystal was happy to see that her sister was not there so she would not bug her. Crystal walked out there and said that she was sorry. Her Mother said, "Ok, but never do that again." Crystal agreed not to do it again.

She went back on her balcony. Crystal saw the people but this time more people had video cameras. Crystal yelled, "I am sorry for what I did I will never yell at you nice people again!" Then, she waved to the crowd and went into her room. After that, Crystal and Ruby looked through the window ; saw all of the people getting into their news cars. They were going to their newsroom to publish the story. Crystal was so happy that she started to jump on Crystal's queen size bed!
Two hours later she went into the living room and jumped on the couch! Her Mother laugh, "What are you doing, funny girl?" Crystal graped the remote and put it on the news channel! They all sat and watched even Ruby watched TV. They saw her saying sorry on TV! They all hugged her! The only two that didn't was Rose and Ruby.
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