About Crystal Davis

I created the book: Crystal Davis-The Amazing Girl
Because I thought people would like to see a adventure book about a 11 year old girl. I hope you like it! Commet about if you like or not. I wish this book could be published some day.
Thank you!

Charactars

Theses are the Charactars so far:
Mom (Alexandera Davis, Mrs. Davis, Queen of Fashion)
Dad (Leo Davis, Mr. Davis, King of Fashion)
Rose Davis (oldest daughter of Mrs and Mr. Davis)
Crystal (youngest daughter of Mrs and Mr Davis)
Butler (Crystal's butler, no name yet)
Ruby(Crystal's dog)
Another new servant for Crystal, Mr, Wood
The servant's two daughters(the one living with Crystal. Her name is June) the other one (living with Rose is Amy, there both eleven, but they are not twins)
Dawn(poodle, Amy's dog, the dog is a girl)
That is all the Charctars so far!...
If you have just started reading this I would tell you to start to the begining to the last post I made...

About the Charactars

Crystal Davis: Long blond hair, blue eyes, and likes to play the violin. She also very great in her privite school at her mansion. She hangs out with her yorkie, Ruby. Ruby is her only friend. She is nice but sometimes she can loose her timper. Crystal is 11.
Rose Davis: Short red hair, brown eyes, and does not play anything. She is ok in school. She is very mean to her sister and everyone else but mostly mean to her sister, Crystal. Rose is 14.
Alexandera Davis: She is the mom of Crystal and Rose. She is married to Leo Davis. She hates to be called Alex. She is not strict but she is very smart. She is 35. She has dirty blond hair and hazel eye color.
Leo Davis: Leo is married to Alexandera Davis. Leo is the dad of Crystal and Rose. He is a little strict and he is kind to everyone. He is also 35. He has redish brownish hair color and brown dark blue eyes.

Crystal Davis: Her fans

I have seen that some of you wish that my book was more exciting. I will try to make it very exciting! Maybe you can give me some ideas? And really people! I am only on page 9! It will get more exciting! But I wish you could be less mean. One person said that I hate this book! On one of the polls. I know my book is not as good as Chloe Kates! I just wish you people would be creative and think of this book. Like the best thing of your life! Like for of you people said, "The is just ok! If you hate it so bad just quiet reading! I don't care! I would like to see you do a better job!

Tuesday, October 13, 2009

The bad news!

"I hate that my sister always bothers me, Ruby! I mean I am getting a phone for Christmas! Why couldn't I be a only child? Ruby, you are my only friend even if you are a dog," Crystal said.
Then, she went out on her balcony. When she just thought it was peaceful, she saw flashing cameras below the balcony. Her face got really red and she yelled, "Why can't you people just leave us alone! You people need to bother other people once in a while!"
Crystal ran in her room all mad and watched TV for two hours. Finally, her parents yelled for Crystal and her sister to watch the news with them. They all sat on their thousand dollar couches. The news reporter said, "We have a new highlight on Crystal Davis!" Then the video started. It showed Crystal yelling over the balcony! Finally, the terrible video was over. The news reporter said, "That little Crystal has too much anger!" The parents' mouths were dropped down. Crystal's sister laughed, "Ha ha, you were so dumb to do that!" Crystal's Father yelled, "Crystal! You are grounded since you made all of us look bad! Now we are going to get complains about this! Go to your room Crystal and Rose stop laughing!" Crystal ran to her room and started to cry!....
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