About Crystal Davis

I created the book: Crystal Davis-The Amazing Girl
Because I thought people would like to see a adventure book about a 11 year old girl. I hope you like it! Commet about if you like or not. I wish this book could be published some day.
Thank you!

Charactars

Theses are the Charactars so far:
Mom (Alexandera Davis, Mrs. Davis, Queen of Fashion)
Dad (Leo Davis, Mr. Davis, King of Fashion)
Rose Davis (oldest daughter of Mrs and Mr. Davis)
Crystal (youngest daughter of Mrs and Mr Davis)
Butler (Crystal's butler, no name yet)
Ruby(Crystal's dog)
Another new servant for Crystal, Mr, Wood
The servant's two daughters(the one living with Crystal. Her name is June) the other one (living with Rose is Amy, there both eleven, but they are not twins)
Dawn(poodle, Amy's dog, the dog is a girl)
That is all the Charctars so far!...

If you have just started reading this I would tell you to start to the begining to the last post I made...

About the Charactars

Crystal Davis: Long blond hair, blue eyes, and likes to play the violin. She also very great in her privite school at her mansion. She hangs out with her yorkie, Ruby. Ruby is her only friend. She is nice but sometimes she can loose her timper. Crystal is 11.
Rose Davis: Short red hair, brown eyes, and does not play anything. She is ok in school. She is very mean to her sister and everyone else but mostly mean to her sister, Crystal. Rose is 14.
Alexandera Davis: She is the mom of Crystal and Rose. She is married to Leo Davis. She hates to be called Alex. She is not strict but she is very smart. She is 35. She has dirty blond hair and hazel eye color.
Leo Davis: Leo is married to Alexandera Davis. Leo is the dad of Crystal and Rose. He is a little strict and he is kind to everyone. He is also 35. He has redish brownish hair color and brown dark blue eyes.

Crystal Davis: Her fans

I have seen that some of you wish that my book was more exciting. I will try to make it very exciting! Maybe you can give me some ideas? And really people! I am only on page 9! It will get more exciting! But I wish you could be less mean. One person said that I hate this book! On one of the polls. I know my book is not as good as Chloe Kates! I just wish you people would be creative and think of this book. Like the best thing of your life! Like for of you people said, "The is just ok! If you hate it so bad just quiet reading! I don't care! I would like to see you do a better job!

Saturday, October 17, 2009

Something happend!

Crystal said, "Ok, whatever your name is. This is your blow-up bed. Do what ever you want with it." The girl happily said, "My name is June! I love your room! I will put out my bed. I-." Crystal interrupted, "Yes, you do not have to talk so much. Just bring in your bags and put them down on the floor. You can do whatever-. June interrupted, "Don't forget my dog. I have a dog. His name is Oscar! He is a big german shepard. You might need to be careful he jumps, bites, and likes to run. June went to get her bags. She had six bags! It took her thirty minutes to unpack all her stuff. After that she put her stuff in some empty shelves. Once she put the bags up she whistled. Crystal heard foot steps coming closer and closer. There was this big dog right in front of her! Ruby got scared and jumped into Crystal's lap.
For a longtime they all watched TV. They all heard dinner ready when the servants yelled. Everyone sat at the table. All but the servants, of course! The dogs have there own silver table that they eat. For the people they have a real gold table that they eat.. Everyone ate Steak, corn, rolls, and cake. The cooks made Crystal's favorite cake, oreo cake! No one talked while they ate. After forty minutes everyone was finished. They ate dinner too late! It was nine forty when they finished.
Crystal, Oscar, Ruby, and June watched TV four three hours. Finally they all went to sleep. Crystal and Ruby slept till eleven a.m. They were waked up by a weird noise. Crystal got out of her bed and went into the living room. She saw June and Oscar dancing! At first she thought she was dreaming so she rubbed her eyes. She saw a June dancing with her dog again. Crystal burst out laughing! Crystal laughed, "You are so crazy!" June looked she and smiled. As, Crystal was looking she could see that June was wearing Crystal's favorite dress! Crystal yelled, "Why are you wearing my dress? I do not like people wearing my favorite red dress!" June said, "Oh, I liked it and I thought you would not minded. I will take it off, but as she was walking toward Crystal's room... Oscar jumped up on the dress and his dirty paws touched the dress and.... They heard a rip! Crystal said, "Please tell me that was not my dress!" June made a sad face and said, "It was!"
Crystal yelled, "I hate your dumb dog!"
Find out what happens next on Crystal Davis....

2 comments:

Allison Margaret :) said...

I think you should name the butler Jameson!!! That sounds like a fancey butler name! "OH JAMESON!!!! COME GET MY DIRTY LAUNDRY!!!!!!!" Haha. Did you know that I used to think butler was a bad word? Well I did! BUT-ler! It sounds like BUTT!!!!! HAHA!!!! I was a crazy, little child!!!!

Bobcat said...

funny maybe later in the story I will get Rose a butler and it will be Jameson.