About Crystal Davis

I created the book: Crystal Davis-The Amazing Girl
Because I thought people would like to see a adventure book about a 11 year old girl. I hope you like it! Commet about if you like or not. I wish this book could be published some day.
Thank you!

Charactars

Theses are the Charactars so far:
Mom (Alexandera Davis, Mrs. Davis, Queen of Fashion)
Dad (Leo Davis, Mr. Davis, King of Fashion)
Rose Davis (oldest daughter of Mrs and Mr. Davis)
Crystal (youngest daughter of Mrs and Mr Davis)
Butler (Crystal's butler, no name yet)
Ruby(Crystal's dog)
Another new servant for Crystal, Mr, Wood
The servant's two daughters(the one living with Crystal. Her name is June) the other one (living with Rose is Amy, there both eleven, but they are not twins)
Dawn(poodle, Amy's dog, the dog is a girl)
That is all the Charctars so far!...
If you have just started reading this I would tell you to start to the begining to the last post I made...

About the Charactars

Crystal Davis: Long blond hair, blue eyes, and likes to play the violin. She also very great in her privite school at her mansion. She hangs out with her yorkie, Ruby. Ruby is her only friend. She is nice but sometimes she can loose her timper. Crystal is 11.
Rose Davis: Short red hair, brown eyes, and does not play anything. She is ok in school. She is very mean to her sister and everyone else but mostly mean to her sister, Crystal. Rose is 14.
Alexandera Davis: She is the mom of Crystal and Rose. She is married to Leo Davis. She hates to be called Alex. She is not strict but she is very smart. She is 35. She has dirty blond hair and hazel eye color.
Leo Davis: Leo is married to Alexandera Davis. Leo is the dad of Crystal and Rose. He is a little strict and he is kind to everyone. He is also 35. He has redish brownish hair color and brown dark blue eyes.

Crystal Davis: Her fans

I have seen that some of you wish that my book was more exciting. I will try to make it very exciting! Maybe you can give me some ideas? And really people! I am only on page 9! It will get more exciting! But I wish you could be less mean. One person said that I hate this book! On one of the polls. I know my book is not as good as Chloe Kates! I just wish you people would be creative and think of this book. Like the best thing of your life! Like for of you people said, "The is just ok! If you hate it so bad just quiet reading! I don't care! I would like to see you do a better job!

Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Worse and worse it gets

Crystal yelled, "Why did you do that?! You should know that you should not put my stuff on! June, you have your own clothes." June had tears in her eyes, "I-I... I am sorry. I just thought-. Crystal went in her room and sat there. After a while she had to go to her school in her mansion. When school ended, Crystal went in her room. She noticed that her balcony door was opened. Crystal went out there ; she saw June blowing kisses at the people with flashing cameras. Crystal yanked the dress that June was wearing. Crystal pulled her inside ; locked the door. Crystal said madly, "Why were you out there blowing kisses at the crowd? We are going to get a bad report on the news because of you! Why are you so dumb?" June said, "They love me and they were-." Crystal interrupted, "No, they do not love you! They are going to make a report on the news about a strange girl in Crystal's bedroom! I wish you did not live here!" June ran away with tears in her eyes. Crystal was hoping that June would get grounded.
Crystal slept an hour or two. Then her Father yelled, "Crystal get in her now! You are in big trouble." He also told June to get in there. Crystal new what happened and she new it will not be pretty.
Come back to see what happens next on Crystal Davis....
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