About Crystal Davis

I created the book: Crystal Davis-The Amazing Girl
Because I thought people would like to see a adventure book about a 11 year old girl. I hope you like it! Commet about if you like or not. I wish this book could be published some day.
Thank you!

Charactars

Theses are the Charactars so far:
Mom (Alexandera Davis, Mrs. Davis, Queen of Fashion)
Dad (Leo Davis, Mr. Davis, King of Fashion)
Rose Davis (oldest daughter of Mrs and Mr. Davis)
Crystal (youngest daughter of Mrs and Mr Davis)
Butler (Crystal's butler, no name yet)
Ruby(Crystal's dog)
Another new servant for Crystal, Mr, Wood
The servant's two daughters(the one living with Crystal. Her name is June) the other one (living with Rose is Amy, there both eleven, but they are not twins)
Dawn(poodle, Amy's dog, the dog is a girl)
That is all the Charctars so far!...

If you have just started reading this I would tell you to start to the begining to the last post I made...

About the Charactars

Crystal Davis: Long blond hair, blue eyes, and likes to play the violin. She also very great in her privite school at her mansion. She hangs out with her yorkie, Ruby. Ruby is her only friend. She is nice but sometimes she can loose her timper. Crystal is 11.
Rose Davis: Short red hair, brown eyes, and does not play anything. She is ok in school. She is very mean to her sister and everyone else but mostly mean to her sister, Crystal. Rose is 14.
Alexandera Davis: She is the mom of Crystal and Rose. She is married to Leo Davis. She hates to be called Alex. She is not strict but she is very smart. She is 35. She has dirty blond hair and hazel eye color.
Leo Davis: Leo is married to Alexandera Davis. Leo is the dad of Crystal and Rose. He is a little strict and he is kind to everyone. He is also 35. He has redish brownish hair color and brown dark blue eyes.

Crystal Davis: Her fans

I have seen that some of you wish that my book was more exciting. I will try to make it very exciting! Maybe you can give me some ideas? And really people! I am only on page 9! It will get more exciting! But I wish you could be less mean. One person said that I hate this book! On one of the polls. I know my book is not as good as Chloe Kates! I just wish you people would be creative and think of this book. Like the best thing of your life! Like for of you people said, "The is just ok! If you hate it so bad just quiet reading! I don't care! I would like to see you do a better job!

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Chapter 2: Airplane

"Don't worry we will not tell anyone. I will call the Paris Airport to get on the plane tomorrow," whispered Crystal. They walked into their bedroom. Amy said sadly, "They will not let you get on a plane the day before the flight!" Crystal said, "Of course they will! This is Crystal Davis you are talking about!" Crystal called the airport.

Airport lady: Yes, how may I help you?

Crystal: I want to make a flight tomorrow to LA, California to America.

Airport Lady: You are too late to call.

Crystal: This is Crystal Davis you are talking to!

The Airport Lady screamed ; Crystal and Amy jumped! Because the scream was so loud!

Airport Lady: Do-don't worry we will give you a private jet instead.

Crystal: Ok, I will give you a signed paper with my name on it. Thanks for the jet!

Airport Lady: Now you get it free to go on the jet!

Crystal: Ok, bye!



Crystal hung up the phone. Crystal told Amy the plan. Amy cried, "We can't go! Those people will see us. You know the crazy cameras!" Crystal had already planned it out. Crystal scold, "I already have it planned out. Start packing ; we have a long morning ahead of us."


Crystal and Amy finally finished packing. You could see the sun peaking out of the trees. Crystal whispered, "Let's go. It is five o'clock in the morning." Crystal and Amy both knew that there will have to be two loads to carry.
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Crystal grabbed Ruby's deluxe cage. Ruby was already in the cage. Amy grabbed Dawn's deluxe bag. Dawn didn't make a sound. The girls both carried the little pups. Crystal stopped and put the pup down.
Amy asked, "Why did we stop in front of your carpet?" Crystal made no answer. Crystal put the Ruby down. Crystal lifted up the carpet. It was a escape exit! Crystal whispered, " Slide down this escape exit. It is the only way out so those people will not see us. First, put the dogs down first." Amy nodded. Amy slid Dawn down first. Dawn was in her cage. Dawn's brown eyes sparkled with fear. Amy slid her down there. Dawn's cage raddled as it went down. Ruby was next. Ruby's tail wagged with happiness. Crystal slid her down.
They went back in Crystal's room. Amy asked, "Where does the escape exit go?" Crystal said nothing. Finally they grabbed all the bags. They slid the bags down the escape exit.
Crsytal whispered, "Go down first just to be safe." Amy nodded. She slid down. Then Crystal pulled the cover over her and slid down.
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2 comments:

Allison Margaret :) said...

Cool! :)

Allison Margaret :) said...

Wow, you haven't posted in almost two months...