About Crystal Davis

I created the book: Crystal Davis-The Amazing Girl
Because I thought people would like to see a adventure book about a 11 year old girl. I hope you like it! Commet about if you like or not. I wish this book could be published some day.
Thank you!

Charactars

Theses are the Charactars so far:
Mom (Alexandera Davis, Mrs. Davis, Queen of Fashion)
Dad (Leo Davis, Mr. Davis, King of Fashion)
Rose Davis (oldest daughter of Mrs and Mr. Davis)
Crystal (youngest daughter of Mrs and Mr Davis)
Butler (Crystal's butler, no name yet)
Ruby(Crystal's dog)
Another new servant for Crystal, Mr, Wood
The servant's two daughters(the one living with Crystal. Her name is June) the other one (living with Rose is Amy, there both eleven, but they are not twins)
Dawn(poodle, Amy's dog, the dog is a girl)
That is all the Charctars so far!...

If you have just started reading this I would tell you to start to the begining to the last post I made...

About the Charactars

Crystal Davis: Long blond hair, blue eyes, and likes to play the violin. She also very great in her privite school at her mansion. She hangs out with her yorkie, Ruby. Ruby is her only friend. She is nice but sometimes she can loose her timper. Crystal is 11.
Rose Davis: Short red hair, brown eyes, and does not play anything. She is ok in school. She is very mean to her sister and everyone else but mostly mean to her sister, Crystal. Rose is 14.
Alexandera Davis: She is the mom of Crystal and Rose. She is married to Leo Davis. She hates to be called Alex. She is not strict but she is very smart. She is 35. She has dirty blond hair and hazel eye color.
Leo Davis: Leo is married to Alexandera Davis. Leo is the dad of Crystal and Rose. He is a little strict and he is kind to everyone. He is also 35. He has redish brownish hair color and brown dark blue eyes.

Crystal Davis: Her fans

I have seen that some of you wish that my book was more exciting. I will try to make it very exciting! Maybe you can give me some ideas? And really people! I am only on page 9! It will get more exciting! But I wish you could be less mean. One person said that I hate this book! On one of the polls. I know my book is not as good as Chloe Kates! I just wish you people would be creative and think of this book. Like the best thing of your life! Like for of you people said, "The is just ok! If you hate it so bad just quiet reading! I don't care! I would like to see you do a better job!

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Planning

Crystal saw that her lawyer looked surprised. Crystal's bright blue eyes said that she was serious. The lawyer said, "Yes, you just have to... Make her parents quit! Make them mad and make them quit-" Amy yelped, "If they quit they will not let me stay here!" Amy's Lime green eyes looked angry. Crystal started to think.
Crystal ran out of the door happily. Dragging Amy behind her. Crystal whispered in the hall, "We will run away to America!"Amy thought for a minute. Amy whispered, "Why not China?" Crystal whispered, "Because they have to many earthquakes, we are going to America. The good thing is that I can speak English, little Spanish, and French. We will leave Wednesday five in the morning. I will take all my gold, silver, and jewels." Amy asked quietly, "Why are we moving away? Were are we going to stay? What about Ruby? I am worried about moving away." Crystal said, " Ruby is coming! What about your dog? I am not talking about that June's big dog. We are moving away because June is out of control! My parents will not do anything about it either! We will talk about which hotel we are going to stay at. All I know is that we are going to LA! Are you coming or not?" Amy whispered, "I am coming! Don't worry I will bring my poodle, Dawn. We should leave a note about that we are running away. Let's not tell were we are running away to," muttered Amy.
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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

WOW it's getting interesting!!! i think its awesome!!