About Crystal Davis

I created the book: Crystal Davis-The Amazing Girl
Because I thought people would like to see a adventure book about a 11 year old girl. I hope you like it! Commet about if you like or not. I wish this book could be published some day.
Thank you!

Charactars

Theses are the Charactars so far:
Mom (Alexandera Davis, Mrs. Davis, Queen of Fashion)
Dad (Leo Davis, Mr. Davis, King of Fashion)
Rose Davis (oldest daughter of Mrs and Mr. Davis)
Crystal (youngest daughter of Mrs and Mr Davis)
Butler (Crystal's butler, no name yet)
Ruby(Crystal's dog)
Another new servant for Crystal, Mr, Wood
The servant's two daughters(the one living with Crystal. Her name is June) the other one (living with Rose is Amy, there both eleven, but they are not twins)
Dawn(poodle, Amy's dog, the dog is a girl)
That is all the Charctars so far!...

If you have just started reading this I would tell you to start to the begining to the last post I made...

About the Charactars

Crystal Davis: Long blond hair, blue eyes, and likes to play the violin. She also very great in her privite school at her mansion. She hangs out with her yorkie, Ruby. Ruby is her only friend. She is nice but sometimes she can loose her timper. Crystal is 11.
Rose Davis: Short red hair, brown eyes, and does not play anything. She is ok in school. She is very mean to her sister and everyone else but mostly mean to her sister, Crystal. Rose is 14.
Alexandera Davis: She is the mom of Crystal and Rose. She is married to Leo Davis. She hates to be called Alex. She is not strict but she is very smart. She is 35. She has dirty blond hair and hazel eye color.
Leo Davis: Leo is married to Alexandera Davis. Leo is the dad of Crystal and Rose. He is a little strict and he is kind to everyone. He is also 35. He has redish brownish hair color and brown dark blue eyes.

Crystal Davis: Her fans

I have seen that some of you wish that my book was more exciting. I will try to make it very exciting! Maybe you can give me some ideas? And really people! I am only on page 9! It will get more exciting! But I wish you could be less mean. One person said that I hate this book! On one of the polls. I know my book is not as good as Chloe Kates! I just wish you people would be creative and think of this book. Like the best thing of your life! Like for of you people said, "The is just ok! If you hate it so bad just quiet reading! I don't care! I would like to see you do a better job!

Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Good to Bad

<em>Crystal walked in the living room. Crystal saw June in the living room. Crystal also saw that she still had tears all over June's face. Crystal's Dad flipped on the TV it was on the news. It had June out on the balcony blowing kisses at the crowd. Alexandra, Leo Davis, and June's Dad all faced to her. Crystal was thinking that this was going to be good. June's dad yelled at her and told her to go to the hallway. Crystal standed by June's sister, Amy. Amy whispered, "She is such a cry baby." Crystal whispered back, "Tell me about it.... You must be June's sister, Amy. Amy said, "Yes I am! She told you that I was her sister?" Crystal said, "No, I was just guessing because I a have never seen you before... I bet you are having a hard time with Rose. Wait... Maybe you can live in my room and June can live in Rose's room." "OK, lets ask if we can," Amy said happily. They ask Crystal's mother and she said yes! Crystal and Amy got all of Amy's things and put her stuff in Crystal's room. Crystal said, "I am glad that you are living in my room now. Now since that is done. Lets put June's stuff in Rose's room. It took a whole hour to put everything in it's place.
June opened the door! June was very mad. June said angerly, "Where is all of my stuff?" Amy said, "It is in Rose's room! Now you do not have to bother Crystal! Ha ha ha!" June walked out of the room and slammed the door! Amy said, "She is finally gone and-." Crystal interrupted, "Wait for it..." Crystal, Amy, and Ruby heard a scream! Crystal and Amy laughed. They both knew that was Rose screaming at June. Crystal and Amy didn't want to go in Rose's room. If they did, bad things would happen! They finally went to sleep at one in the morning!
Crystal wokeup at eleven in the morning. When she woke-up, she saw June with Crystal's dog, Ruby! Ruby was in a pink tu-tu and lipstick! Crystal thought she was dreaming so she rubbed her eyes. Amy walked in and look at Ruby. She also rubbed her eyes. Crystal and Amy knew they were not dreaming. Crystal yelled, "Get out and clean up my dog! Get her out of that ugly junk! Amy it is time! Crystal got dressed. Amy lets go! I am going to get my suitcase, Crystal said. Amy went with her. Crystal went into a office that Amy has never seen before. Amy knew that this is Crystal's lawyer's office. Crystal threw her suitcase and her hands down on the lawyer's desk. She asked, "So, how do you get rid off a eleven year old girl?!?"

Thank you! come back next time!

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Wow this is awesome!!